Wednesday, March 11, 2009

Milo's Magical Stones (sad ending) Emmi

Milo didn’t want the other mice to be jealous. The mice were eager to find their own Magical stone. With jealous feelings and envy the mice were off. They were pushing and shoving. One of the mice got scratched near the eye but still went on .When the mice found the place where Milo had found his stone. Milo looked at the wise one and frowned. Milo and the wise one knew there would be a horrible scene.

After Milo ran over to where he had found his stone he tried to stop all the other mice. But they wouldn’t listen. They only cared if they got their own stone. They scattered along the rocky cliff. All the mice looked in every nook and cranny. They had no luck of finding a stone. After midnight they came back with nothing in their hands. Milo was happy but he didn’t show his feelings. His sister Molly was crying for a stone. Milo tried to comfort her but it didn’t work. So Milo went down to the beach and tried to think of what to give the island in return. He decided to go back after half an hour of thinking.

That night the mice made a plan to steal Milo’s stone. The next day they told Milo to get breakfast. So Milo went down to the beach. After he had left the other mice crept in Milo’s cave and grabbed his stone. They started to fight for whom would get the stone but they were too loud and a big boulder came crashing down. The mice were stuck forever. When Milo came back the wise one told Milo everything. Milo said he wouldn’t have to give something back after all. Since that day Milo and the wise one were the only two mice left.

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