Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Milo and The Magical Stones ,Daniel


The mice looked enviously at Milo’s stone thinking, “I want one of those I need one of those!” As all of the mice were thinking up a plan to steal Milo’s stone, he tried to carve up a pattern on a stone. But took up too much time. But, he had an idea that seemed to have popped out of the blue had hit him hard on the face, or it was his greedy little brother Scot. But the idea was brilliant. If he could get some help from his fellow mice than Milo might have a chance to pull it off. He asked the mice and they all agreed to help him.

So half of the mice looked for more stones and the others helped to build it. The plan of the temple took up 20 pieces of paper! When they finally started to construct the temple the mice had an idea, maybe if they could make the temple weaker than they could lure Milo into it without his stone and make it collapse on him so that they could take his stone. So all of the mice resumed building, but Milo thought that something was going on. So he asked Balthazar the wise one if he felt it as well and he did! “Go with caution Milo said Balthazar.


So after about four weeks the temple was complete. That night the mice tried to lure Milo into the temple but it was a failure. But, forgetting about the stability of the temple the tried to rip the stones out of walls. “CRASH, BANG” the temple collapsed and killed all of the jealous mice. But when poor Milo returned to the temple to he find it in pieces.”Noo”yelled Milo. He ran as fast as he could to Balthazar but he was asleep.” I guess that it’s just me and you now Balthazar” said Milo sadly. So Milo went back and finished his stone and gave it back to the island.

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